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Thursday, 23 May 2019

persuasive writing

Hi everyone. This week we have been doing persuasive writing. Some children wrote about dogs but I wrote about cats. I hope you like my writing. Don't forget to comment on my writing. 

Hi my name is Zara I am going to tell you about cats.  There are three different types of cats a persian cats, and munchkin cats and a sphynx cats.

Persian cats are big and fluffy. When they are in the dark their eyes glow.  Some Persian cats are gray cats, or they could be orange or white.

Munchkin cats are tiny and they have tiny legs. They have different colours and they are cute. They are fluffy  as well. When they are kittens they are cheeky because they scratch couches and if you have a goldfish they might try and get them!    

Sphynx cats have no fur and they have wrinkly skin. They have tall ears because they are sphynx cats. They need to look after their baby. Sphynx cats like to play with knitting balls and cat toys.

I have written  about munchkin cats persian cats sphynx cats.   They all make good pets.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 

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